K的工作与学习

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The topic of unit 2 is "the milestones in my life":

One of the most important events in my lift (SP)(>>life)is my first job. Why is it so meaningful for me? First of all, I believe it is the cornerstone for the lines of trade which I will be in. I prefer to work (I(x))(>>with)what I like or what I am interested in, instead of what I have to. Secondly, working means that I am not a little girl anymore, no one could protect me (I(x))(>>such)as my parents or friends in a company, I have responsibilities for what I do as a real woman. Finally, I earn my salary indeed!

Here is the comment from my teacher:

"Thank you for telling me about your important milestone, your first job. Your writing is well developed and easy to read. You are using vocabulary that is appropriate to the topic and level. Please take care with your spelling. This is a simple mistake that can easily be corrected and help to advance your writing to the next level. Please be sure to use a spellcheck program whenever possible. events in my lift (SP)(>>life)is my first job The other errors that you made were minor and will quickly be improved with more practice of this kind. Overall, this was an excellent piece of writing. Keep up the good work."