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2007-05-28

Negotiating a deal - [学习日誌]

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Dear Owner,

I am interested in your car which you have placed (I(x))(>>in)the advertising on newspaper today. I like that car, but I am wondering for (PR)(>>about)the price, you know,(PH)(>>as) your price is higher than other second-hand cars which(I(x))(>>is) in similar style. Would you consider giving me a ten percent discount? If you did so, I would buy it, further more, in cash!

Looking forward to your prompt reply. Hope to see you soon!

Best Regards,
Katherine

Teacher's comment:

Your passage was very clearly written today, and you've done a good job in keeping it simple. Have a great time! You did well in keeping your writing simple and short. Check out the proper usage of the essentials like, verb tense, phraseology, part of speech, word order and article, preposition for better formation of sentences and to gain better grades as you progress. Please review my corrections and work on them. Good luck with future assignments. Happy writing - Martin.